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The homework for 20th May.

조윤호/2025-05-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q : What do you think of people who eat food on trains or buses? A : I think a person who eating food on trains or buses is a rude. I had a experience one person took a food and ate it in train. I felt disgusted because i drunk before that day. It was hard to endure. I understand drinking water or eating snacks without smell. However, eating food with smell in the public transportation is rude and no sense of basic manner.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Eddy!
Thank you for your effort in writing! You explained your opinion clearly. Here are a few quick tips: use correct verb forms like “eats” instead of “eating” for general statements, and try using “a strong smell” instead of just “smell” for clarity. Keep practicing—you’re doing well!
~~Teacher Kate 

I think a person who eating food on trains or buses is a rude.
>>I think a person who eats food on trains or buses is rude.
I had a experience one person took a food and ate it in train.
>>I had an experience where someone brought food and ate it on the train.
I felt disgusted because i drunk before that day. It was hard to endure.
>>I felt disgusted because I had drunk the day before. It was hard to endure.
I understand drinking water or eating snacks without smell.
>>I understand drinking water or eating snacks without a strong smell.
However, eating food with smell in the public transportation is rude and no sense of basic manner.
>>However, eating food with a strong smell on public transportation is rude and shows a lack of basic manners.



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