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Yes, I like Mickey Mouse.

유수빈/2025-05-20

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Yes, I like Mickey Mouse. He is wearing a red pants, and yellow shoes. I like this color combination. Especially, he is always smiling happily. So, whenever I feel down, I use to look up Mickey Mouse video.
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Hi Subin! 

I really like Mickey Mouse. 
My dream is to go to Disneyland. 
I have many things that have a Mickey Mouse print. 

Andrea 

Yes, I like Mickey Mouse.
>> Correct

He is wearing a red pants, and yellow shoes. 
>> He wears red pants and yellow shoes. 

I like this color combination.
>> Correct 

Especially, he is always smiling happily.
>> He always smiles happily. 

So, whenever I feel down, I use to look up Mickey Mouse video.
>> So whenever I feel down, I used to look up Mickey Mouse videos. 
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