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Do you think colon cleansing is an effective way to avoid stomach problems and diseases?

이복희/2025-05-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I didn't know 'colon cleansing'. So I searched what is the 'colon cleansing' . Colon cleansing is the way that remove coprostasis. If I have coprostasis, I need it, but I have good colon, I don't need it. The way most of things is not good way about all people. I don't know how to do 'colon cleansing'. Even if this way is good for colon, but I don't want to do it.
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Hi, Ms. Eva!
Me neither, I didn't have any knowledge about colonirrigation or colon cleansing until I saw a lot of video clips circualting online. THe first thing that came to my mind is the recommendtion of doctors, which I learned that it is not safe when it is not needed especially not prescribed by doctors.
Stay well.
Aki~


I didn't know 'colon cleansing'. So I searched what is the 'colon cleansing'.
>>> I didn't know 'colon cleansing'. So I searched what 'colon cleansing.

Colon cleansing is the way that remove coprostasis.
>>> Colon cleansing is the way that removes coprostasis.

If I have coprostasis, I need it, but I have good colon, I don't need it.
>>> If I have coprostasis, I need it, but if I have a good colon, I don't need it.

The way most of things is not good way about all people.
>>> Most things are not a good way for all people.

I don't know how to do 'colon cleansing'.
>>> CORRECT!

Even if this way is good for colon, but I don't want to do it.
>>> Even if this way is good for the colon, I don't want to do it.
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