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박종욱/2025-06-09

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1) b 2) a 3) b 4) c 5) d 6) a It's wonderful Monday Jeny! I hope it will be a good start for the week. These days, I have a stress for my business. because, i got a smp skill but always problem is marketing i think I never on my business before so, It's not easy But, i have to do this step by step !! Always not easy fitst time right? Thank you Jeny see you on Wednesday !

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Jon!!

It is always not that easy to run a business, especially during the first months.

Have the courage to do your best and don't give up. It is also the same in studying a language. Determination is a must.

Have a great day.

T.Jeny

1) b

>>a. By dint of

2) a

>>correct

3) b

>>correct

4) c

>>a. At the top of

5) d

>>b. At variance with

6) a
>>correct
It's wonderful Monday Jeny!

>>It's a wonderful Monday Jeny!
I hope it will be a good start for the week.

>>correct
These days, I have a stress for my business.

>>correct
because, i got a smp skill but always problem is marketing i think

>>I Have a SMP skill but I think I am always having a problem in marketing.
I never on my business before so, It's not easy

>>I have never run a business before so it's not easy.
But, I have to do this step by step !!

>>correct
Always not easy fitst time right?

>>And it is always not easy to start a business, right?

>>Yes, it takes time for a business to be established, so be strong and hang on. Have patience!
Thank you Jeny see you on Wednesday !

>>correct