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The homework for 19th May.

조윤호/2025-05-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q : Have you ever seen a bad accident? What happened? A : Yes, I have. I saw a bad accident when i was young. One day, me and younger brother were playing in front of road. When a traffic light turns to green, my brother ran to the opposite side. However, suddenly a taxi accelerated speed and made an accident. But, fortunately, my brother does not hurt much.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Eddy!
Thank you for sharing your story! what happened to you and your brother sounded so scary! You explained what happened clearly. Just a small tip: remember to use correct word order like “my brother and I” instead of “me and my brother,” and past tense like “turned” and “was” for past events. Great job—keep practicing!
~~Teacher Kate

Yes, I have.
>>CORRECT!
I saw a bad accident when I was young.
>>CORRECT!
One day, me and younger brother were playing in front of road.
>>One day, my younger brother and I were playing in front of the road.
When a traffic light turns to green, my brother ran to the opposite side.
>>When the traffic light turned green, my brother ran to the opposite side.
However, suddenly a taxi accelerated speed and made an accident.
>>However, suddenly a taxi accelerated and caused an accident.
But, fortunately, my brother does not hurt much.
>>Fortunately, my brother was not hurt much.

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