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차진혁/2025-05-18

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I think the best playground is my friends playground because it is very excitin. So my friends playground very good.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. See you later!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Where do you think is the best playground in the world?Why?

I think the best playground is my friends playground because it is very excitin.

So my friends playground very good.

>>> I think my friend's playground is the best because it is very exciting. My friend's playground is really great!

>>> OR: My friend's playground is amazing! It's the most exciting one I've been to.