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I like watermelon.

유수빈/2025-05-16

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I like watermelon. This season is summer, so I'm looking forward to eat watermelon. Especially, I prefer to eat cool watermelon in the refrigerator. I want to eat a lot, but I can't. Because it's so juicy.

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Hi Kara!^^

I am a fruit lover!

I can eat almost all kinds of fruits except coconut and durian.

The Philippines is a tropical country, so I am so lucky to have various fruits.

Andrea

I like watermelon.

>> Correct

This season is summer, so I'm looking forward to eat watermelon.

>> It is the summer season, so I am looking forward to eating watermelon.

Especially, I prefer to eat cool watermelon in the refrigerator.

>> Especially, I prefer to eat cold watermelon from the refrigerator.

I want to eat a lot, but I can't. Because it's so juicy.

>> I want to eat a lot, but I can't because it's so juicy.