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Write about your trip to Seoul during the long holiday.

차유진/2025-05-13

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I go to the Namsan Tower it is a famous in the Seoul and I eat pork cutlet It is very delicious 😋 and I go to the Myeongdong street it is famous food street.

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Jean~~

Write about your trip to Seoul during the long holiday.

I go to the Namsan Tower it is a famous in the Seoul and I eat pork cutlet It is very delicious;

>>> I went to Namsan Tower, a famous landmark in Seoul, and ate pork cutlet. It was very delicious!

and I go to the Myeongdong street it is famous food street.

>> Also, I went to Myeongdong Street, a famous food street.