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김지숙/2025-05-13

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I hit the punching machine with my fist. And I got aching because I hit it wrong, and I took a break.I saw a mythical creature by the river while I was exercising.
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Hi Eric,

Thanks for doing your homework.
 I wish I would be able to see a mythical creature too!


I hit the punching machine with my fist. 
>> CORRECT!

And I got aching because I hit it wrong, and I took a break.
>> It was painful because I hit it wrong that is why I had to take a break from school. 

I saw a mythical creature by the river while I was exercising.
>> CORRECT!
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