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What is your ideal vacation?

이지윤/2025-05-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Wouldn't my ideal vacation be a really realxing vacation? I think it would be good to go abroad and enjoy a quiet vacation at a luxury hotel or resort with a beacutiful view of the beach. Also, I think it would be good to have a fun and happy time with my family while eating delicious food.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! 

Thank you for sharing your ideal vacation with me. 
I hope we could have one soon! ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

Wouldn't my ideal vacation be a really realxing vacation?
>> Wouldn't my ideal vacation be a really relaxing one?

I think it would be good to go abroad and enjoy a quiet vacation at a luxury hotel or resort with a beacutiful view of the beach.
>> I think it would be good to go abroad and enjoy a quiet vacation at a luxury hotel or resort with a beautiful view of the beach.

Also, I think it would be good to have a fun and happy time with my family while eating delicious food.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Spending joyful moments with my family while enjoying tasty meals would make the trip even better.
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