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I like Jazz music.

유수빈/2025-05-12

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I like Jazz music. I often listen this kind of music, because this music is quite calm. So, when I need to be calm, or When I feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.

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Hi Kara!

The music that I like depends on my emotions.

I like pop songs if I feel happy.

On the other side, I like acoustic songs for peace and quiet time.

Andrea

I like Jazz music.

>> Correct

I often listen this kind of music, because this music is quite calm.

>> I often listen to this kind of music because it is quite calm.

So, when I need to be calm, or When I feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.

>> So, when I need to calm down or feel comfortable and want to sleep, I listen to Jazz music.