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Write about your trip to Seoul during the long holiday?

차진혁/2025-05-08

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I trip is Seoul doing the going to the Namsan tower it is very hard walking. And eat the Namsan fried pork.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening!


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Jean~~






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I trip is Seoul doing the going to the Namsan tower it is very hard walking.
And eat the Namsan fried pork.
>> I took a trip to Seoul and visited Namsan Tower. The walk was very difficult, but I enjoyed eating Namsan fried pork.
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