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I prefer sunrise to sunset.

유수빈/2025-05-05

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I prefer sunrise to sunset. When I see the sunrise, I can feel fresh air with the sounds of birds. Also, sunset means the day is over. On the other hand, sunrise means the day is start, so I'm good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kara!^^

I am not a morning person, so I really can't see the sunrise.

I love the sunset, though.

The sky's color is magnificent and always picturesque.

Andrea

I prefer sunrise to sunset.

>> I prefer sunrise over sunset.

When I see the sunrise, I can feel fresh air with the sounds of birds.

>> When I see the sunrise, I can feel the fresh air, and I can hear the birds chirping.

Sunset means the day is over.

>> Correct

On the other hand, sunrise means the day has started, so I'm good.

>> On the other hand, sunrise means the day has started, so I'm good.