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Househusband

양기연/2025-05-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't care about who manage a house. I think that organizing and managing house works requires some talent. So those who have interest and talent in house management can manage their own house.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
You are right! I think that in our current society, we should ignore gender roles and instead focus on skills and ability. If a man can do house chores better, then society should accept it and not judge him only based on the money he provides, but rather appreciate his contribution and help.
- T. Caitlyn 
I don't care about who manage a house.
>> I don't care about who manages a house.
I think that organizing and managing house works requires some talent. 
>> I think that organizing and managing housework requires some talent.
So those who have interest and talent in house management can manage their own house.
>> So, those who have an interest and talent in house management can manage their own house.
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