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I I would like to have as a pet animal is cat and turtle because cat is very cute and fast. And turtle is I just like.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below.

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Jean~~

What animal would you like to have as a pet? Explain.

I I would like to have as a pet animal is cat and turtle because cat is very cute and fast.

And turtle is I just like.

>> I would like to have a cat and a turtle as pets because cats are very cute and fast, and I just like turtles.