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Yes, I scared of zombies.

유수빈/2025-04-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I scared of zombies. I watched a lot of movies that featuring zombies. Whenever I watch these movies, I think that ‘if I actually meet them, what should I do?’. But, actually I think it’s better to be a zombie if I afraid all day. ^_^
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Hi Kara! 

I am also scared of zombies, but I like watching zombie movies. 
I remember Train to Busan was a very popular zombie movie from Korea. 
That movie was just a light movie, so I enjoyed. 

Andrea 

Yes, I scared of zombies.
>> Yes, I am scared of zombies.

I watched a lot of movies that featuring zombies. 
>> I watched a lot of movies that feature zombies. 

Whenever I watch these movies, I think that ‘if I actually meet them, what should I do?’.
>> Whenever I watch these movies, I think about how I will survive if I meet an actual zombie. 
 
But, actually I think it’s better to be a zombie if I afraid all day. ^_^
>> But actually, I think it’s better to be a zombie if I am afraid all day. ^_^

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