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Like home

최민영/2025-04-27

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Originally I don't have a place completly to feel home. But, particular atmosphier makes me to stay at home. It is that morning without alram, spending time for me without worry of future and a sense of duty to do something. Now, I live in domitory. So, If I get vacation and go to my home, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.

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Hi Soo An!
That's good work you just made there.
The statements you chose were simple and clear.
This is the kind of work I expect from you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

Originally I don't have a place completly to feel home.

>> Originally, I didn't have a place where I could completely feel at home.

But, particular atmosphier makes me to stay at home.

>> However, a particular atmosphere makes me feel at home.
It is that morning without alram, spending time for me without worry of future and a sense of duty to do something.

>> It's those mornings without an alarm, spending time for myself without worrying about the future or a sense of duty to do something.
Now, I live in domitory.

>> Now, I live in a dormitory.

So, If I get vacation and go to my home, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.

>> So, when I get a vacation and go home, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.