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엄예린/2025-04-27

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Writing task: Are there any jobs you think are not paid enough? Why are those workers undervalued? I think the almost part time jobs are not paid enough. Because they get a minimum wage. Even if you work for a long time, lots of employer don't give a bonus. Many academics do the part time job and learn the first work life in there. Some owner don't treat their employees well and ignore them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Lina! You bring up an important point about the treatment of employees. Not all employers show the same level of respect, and poor treatment can be a serious issue, particularly when workers are already undervalued in terms of pay.
-T. Sonny
I think the almost part time jobs are not paid enough.
>>I think most part-time jobs aren’t paid enough
Because they get a minimum wage. 
>>It's because they offer minimum wage.
Even if you work for a long time, lots of employer don't give a bonus.
>>Even if you work for a long time, many employers don’t give bonuses.
Many academics do the part time job and learn the first work life in there.
>>Many students or academics do part-time jobs to gain their first work experience.
Some owner don't treat their employees well and ignore them.
>>However, some employers don’t treat their employees well and tend to ignore them.
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