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Do you think a planner helps you stay organized or simply gives you peace of mind?

이진태/2025-04-25

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I always make a plan and break down tasks in detail before starting work. It helps me don't forget some tasks. So, I can have peace of mind, because I have certain that I never make mistake.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I always make a plan and break down tasks in detail before starting work.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Before starting work, I always create a plan and break down tasks into detailed steps.

It helps me don't forget some tasks.

>> This helps me avoid forgetting tasks.

So, I can have peace of mind, because I have certain that I never make mistake.

>> It gives me peace of mind because I’m confident that I won’t make any mistakes.