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In two sentences, what is your preferred mode of transportation, and why?

임주미/2025-04-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have been driving for 30 years and I usually go to somewhere by my car. Sometimes I take a subway or bus go to downtown or a long distance. I prefer take a bus mode of transportation ,beacase there is bus station whthin a two-minute distance. T.EZRA Thanks your detail explain. This moring I could'nt understand "What should'nt I miss "after class I searched the dictionary. Thank you once again.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Grace! I see! I hope I can drive my own car someday too. I actually know how to drive, but I’m not that confident yet—so I can only imagine how skilled you must be after driving for 30 years!

Taking the bus is also common in my area since we have a bus terminal nearby, although it’s not within walking distance like the one you have.

Thanks a lot for doing the assignment. It’s good! There are just a few minor grammar slips, but there’s always room for improvement. Keep familiarizing yourself with the corrections.

Great job—nice work!
~ T. Ezra

I have been driving for 30 years and I usually go to somewhere by my car.

>> I have been driving for 30 years, and I usually go places by car.
Sometimes I take a subway or bus go to downtown or a long distance.

>> Sometimes, I take the subway or a bus to go downtown or travel long distances.
I prefer take a bus mode of transportation ,beacase there is bus station whthin a two-minute distance.
>> I prefer taking the bus as a mode of transportation because there is a bus station within a two-minute walk.

T.EZRA

Thanks your detail explain.

>> Thank you for your detailed explanation.
This moring I could'nt understand "What should'nt I miss "after class I searched the dictionary.

>> This morning, I couldn't understand the phrase "What shouldn't I miss?" After class, I looked it up in the dictionary.
Thank you once again.

>> CORRECT

Or >> Thanks again!