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Foreign construction worker's issues

양기연/2025-04-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Most foreign workers have no certificates, so they are mostly appointed to simple but labourous work. And they aren't given any job training or enough education. So chances are they are likely to get involved with unexpected accidents or wounded on the construction sites.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Gi Yean!
I see! Most companies hire foreign workers because they can save a lot, but sometimes the benefits they receive are really unfair, and the kind of work they get is often the work that locals don't want.
- T. Caitlyn 
Most foreign workers have no certificates, so they are mostly appointed to simple but labourous work. 
>> CORRECT
And they aren't given any job training or enough education. 
>> They aren't given any job training or sufficient education.
So chances are they are likely to get involved with unexpected accidents or wounded on the construction sites.
>> Chances are that they are likely to get involved in unexpected accidents or get wounded on construction sites.
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