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엄예린/2025-04-16

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Writing task: When do you drink coffee? Do you drink it at the same time every day? I drink a cup of coffee when I should wake up. In particularly, late night before the test on next day or right after eating lunch. I usually don't drink coffee at night, since I can't sleep well. But in my father's case, he drinks coffee 2 or 3 times on a day. He drinks it after having a meal. I'm worried about that but in the study, drinking some coffees is helpful for health.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Lina! It sounds like you have good self-awareness and self-control. You're not overdoing it, and you’re making choices based on how you feel, which is a healthy approach. Plus, being aware of your father's habit and thinking about health shows you care not only about yourself but your family, too.
-T. Sonny
I drink a cup of coffee when I should wake up. 
>>I drink a cup of coffee when I need to stay awake.
In particularly, late night before the test on next day or right after eating lunch.
>>I do it most especially late at night before a test the next day, or right after eating lunch.
I usually don't drink coffee at night, since I can't sleep well.
>>I usually avoid drinking coffee at night, since it makes it hard for me to sleep.
But in my father's case, he drinks coffee 2 or 3 times on a day.
>>But in my father's case, he drinks coffee two or three times a day.
He drinks it after having a meal.
>>He usually drinks it after meals.
I'm worried about that but in the study, drinking some coffees is helpful for health.
>>I'm a bit worried about that, but according to some studies, drinking a moderate amount of coffee can be good for your health.
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