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이현아/2025-04-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your closest friend. Use the following sentence patterns. Name of closest friend If I were to name my closest friend, it would be Hyein. First meeting We first met in high school. What you love doing together We like to chat together.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Isabel. You’ve shared your thoughts clearly and sincerely. It’s easy to feel how special your friendship with Hyein is. The simplicity of your answers actually makes your message more heartfelt. Keep writing like this, and don’t be afraid to add more details or feelings next time. You're expressing yourself well, and it's always a joy to see someone write with both clarity and warmth. Great job!

~ T. Lia

Name of closest friend
If I were to name my closest friend, it would be Hyein.
>> CORRECT

First meeting
We first met in high school.
>> CORRECT

What you love doing together
We like to chat together.
>> CORRECT
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