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Have you considered running your own business? What kind of business would you like to run?

임주미/2025-04-14

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Yes,I've considered my new business. It is salad and sandwiches store ,there are coffee too. If I getting older than nowv,I 'd like tovrun small cafe. It is like a neighborhood room and anyone can come comfortably.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Ju Mi! That sounds like such a warm and inviting vision! A place where people can drop by for a fresh sandwich, a cozy coffee, and just feel at home—it’s the kind of spot every neighborhood needs.
-T. Sonny 
Yes,I've considered my new business.
>>Yes, I’ve been thinking about starting my own business.
It is salad and sandwiches store ,there are coffee too.
>>It would be a salad and sandwich shop that also serves coffee.
If I getting older than nowv,I 'd like tovrun small cafe.
>>In the future, when I’m older, I’d like to run a small café.
It is like a neighborhood room and anyone can come comfortably.
>>It's like a neighborhood space where anyone can come and feel comfortable.
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