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Celebrity

한진원/2025-04-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I could be a celebrity, I would be a singer. The reason is that beautiful songs and lyrics can remain even after I die.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Racheal! I agree that songs become eternal and timeless. It's the singer's legacy to the world. I appreciate great singers and artists from the past and present. See you!
--Teacher Anji

If I could be a celebrity, I would be a singer. 
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The reason is that beautiful songs and lyrics can remain even after I die.
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