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What is the most important change we can make to protect the environment?

오혜영/2025-04-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

What is the most important change we can make to protect the environment? I think I'm a person who has many worries. So, Sometime I worry about the environment in the future. However it doesn't occurs to me any good ways. because, I think we have to stop all things, if we are considering about that, even we are using the internet now. But I think It's practically impossible. Neverthless, we have to protect the environment even the small promise for ours descendants.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! It's natural to worry about the environment. We all have a part to play in protecting it for future generations. Every small effort counts. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Jewel

I think I'm a person who has many worries.

>>I think I'm someone who has a lot of worries.

So, Sometime I worry about the environment in the future.

>>Sometimes, I worry about the environment in the future.

>>Sometimes, I worry about what the future holds for the environment.

However it doesn't occurs to me any good ways.

>>However, I can't think of any good solutions.

because, I think we have to stop all things, if we are considering about that, even we are using the internet now.

>>Because I think we’d have to stop everything to consider that, even with the internet being used now.

But I think It's practically impossible.

>>But I think it's practically impossible.

Neverthless, we have to protect the environment even the small promise for ours descendants.

>>Nevertheless, we have to protect the environment, even if it's just a small promise to our descendants.

>>Nevertheless, we must protect the environment, even with small promises to future generations.