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Ideal family structure

한진원/2025-04-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I believe that an ideal family structure have to include at least a parent and a child. However, nowadays many people do not wish to get married or have children. There aree various reasons for this phenomenon, but I think the most important one is that many people have lost hope or dreams for their future. Modern society tends to force us to give up our dreams

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Racheal! This is an insightful take on family structures. Inasmuch as we would like to maintain such, change is inevitable. The modern society is shifting and changing, and so with our ideals and preferences. Let's just hope that whatever type of family choose to have, they take care of it. See you!

--Teacher Anji

I believe that an ideal family structure have to include at least a parent and a child.

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However, nowadays many people do not wish to get married or have children.

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There aree various reasons for this phenomenon, but I think the most important one is that many people have lost hope or dreams for their future.

>> There are various reasons for this phenomenon, but I think the most important one is that many people have lost hope or dreams for their future.

Modern society tends to force us to give up our dreams.

>> CORRECT