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김가현/2025-04-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. I love myself. 2. I love me that make a promise to be thin. 3. I am a good person. 4. I trust myself. 5. I like me but I will be the better me than now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Ka Hyeon! 

Your answers are really cool! 
Loving oneself is indeed a good thing. 

Andrea 

1. I love myself.
>> Correct 

2. I love me that make a promise to be thin.
>> I love that I promise myself to be thin. 

3. I am a good person.
>> Correct 

4. I trust myself.
>> Correct 

5. I like me but I will be the better me than now.
>> I like myself, but I know I will be better. 
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