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In what ways can tourism help improve a country's infrastructure?

이진태/2025-04-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If some country have a popular tourist spot, the country may need public transportaion and hotel. Like this, tourism can motivate make more infrastructure.
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If some country have a popular tourist spot, the country may need public transportaion and hotel.
>> If a country has a popular tourist spot, it may need more public transportation and hotels.

Like this, tourism can motivate make more infrastructure.
>> In this way, tourism can encourage the development of more infrastructure.
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