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이현아/2025-04-08
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HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your recent family dinner. Use the following sentence patterns.
People you dined with
I had dinner with my parents.
Where you dined
We dined at our house.
Where you had dinner
We shared a delectable meal at our dining room.
What you talked about
We talked about today's weather.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Isabel. Well done! Your answers fit the sentence patterns well and show you understood the structure. Just a small improvement in preposition use (in our dining room) made your sentence sound more natural. Keep it up! You’re doing a great job following instructions and expressing your thoughts.
~ T. Lia
People you dined with
I had dinner with my parents.
>> CORRECT
Where you dined
We dined at our house.
>> CORRECT
Where you had dinner
We shared a delectable meal at our dining room.
>> We shared a delectable meal in our dining room.
What you talked about
We talked about today's weather.
>> CORRECT
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