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What day is the most important to you?

한진원/2025-04-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think Chuseok, the Korean harvest festival, is the most important day because it is a traditional holiday and a day to express gratitude to our beloved ancestors."
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Racheal! It is nice to know that people still appreciate traditions and honor ancestors in this modern day. I hope more people will celebrate with gusto. 
See you!
--Teacher Anji


I think Chuseok, the Korean harvest festival, is the most important day because it is a traditional holiday and a day to express gratitude to our beloved ancestors.
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