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김나은/2025-04-07

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I am warried about many something. When I am warried, I tried to forget warried something. For example, talking whit my frinds and listening to music.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Na Eun. I'm glad to know that you're already learning how to distract yourself from worries, and I hope they are just light worries :) Thank you once again for catching up on your homework. I hope you're having a good rest tonight. See you in the next class! ~Teacher Jane c",)


I am warried about many something. 
>> I am worried about many things. 

When I am warried, I tried to forget warried something. 
>> When I am worried, I try to forget the things I'm worried about. 

For example, talking whit my frinds and listening to music.
>> For example, talking with my friends and listening to music.
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