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2025.04.03 homework!
이노준/2025-04-07
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. The children were happy __ they received their prizes. : because
2. The people listened eagerly __the leader spoke. : while
3. This is the place __ we spent the night. : where
4. __ he tried hard, he failed. : Although
5. __ she is beautiful, she is not intelligent. : Although
6. Will you wait here__ I come? : unless
7. She will not come __ we compel her. : before
8. Do __ you have been told to. : as
9. She began to cry __ she had lost her golden necklace. : because
10. They could not come __ it was raining. : as
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Chris,
We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.
I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.
T. Jeny
>>The children were happy when they received their prizes.
2. The people listened eagerly __the leader spoke. : while
2. The people listened eagerly __the leader spoke. : while
>>correct
3. This is the place __ we spent the night. : where
3. This is the place __ we spent the night. : where
>>correct
4. __ he tried hard, he failed. : Although
4. __ he tried hard, he failed. : Although
>>Though he tried hard, he failed.
5. __ she is beautiful, she is not intelligent. : Although
>>correct
6. Will you wait here__ I come? : unless
6. Will you wait here__ I come? : unless
>>Will you wait here until I come?
7. She will not come __ we compel her. : before
7. She will not come __ we compel her. : before
>>She will not come unless we compel her.
8. Do __ you have been told to. : as
8. Do __ you have been told to. : as
>>correct
9. She began to cry __ she had lost her golden necklace. : because
9. She began to cry __ she had lost her golden necklace. : because
>>correct
10. They could not come __ it was raining. : as
10. They could not come __ it was raining. : as
>>correct
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