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Do you think staying in touch with people regularly is important? Why or why not?

이진태/2025-04-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I lost some many friends especially when I was young. Because I didn't stay in touch. however it is natural. After all, staying in touch is important to keep relationship.
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I lost some many friends especially when I was young. Because I didn't stay in touch. however it is natural.
>> I lost so many friends, especially when I was young, because I didn’t stay in touch. However, I think it’s a natural part of life.

After all, staying in touch is important to keep relationship.
>> In the end, staying in touch is important to maintain a relationship.
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