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What's your favorite season? What do you like about it?

임주미/2025-04-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My favorite season is spring. There are four season in Korea. The best season is spring and fall. I like to see light green when it new sprouts from frozen land. It's really beautiful and cute. It's as far as wonder.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Ju Mi! Spring and fall really do feel like the perfect balance: spring full of fresh energy, and fall with its cozy, calming vibe.  What’s your favorite thing to do in spring? 
-T. Sonny
My favorite season is spring.
>>Correct!
There are four season in Korea.
>>There are four seasons in Korea.
The best season is spring and fall.
>>The best seasons are spring and fall.
I like to see light green when it new sprouts from frozen land.
>>I love to see the light green color of new sprouts growing from the frozen land.
It's really beautiful and cute.
>>Correct!
It's as far as wonder.
>>It feels like a wonder.
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