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이상도/2025-04-06

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HOMEWORK: How did you mentally prepare for basic military training? First of all, it is important to have a heart of love for the country. I tried to have the spirit of caring for and serving the country. I also put in a lot of effort to not have any physical problems.

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Hello, Alex!~

I agree that it depends on your love for your country. Thank you for sharing your opinion~

Chammy

First of all, it is important to have a heart of love for the country.

>> It is important to be patriotic first and foremost.

I tried to have the spirit of caring for and serving the country.

>> I made an effort to embody the values of contributing and supporting our country.

I also put in a lot of effort to not have any physical problems.

>>In addition, I work hard to avoid any health issues.