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My dream job is..

김여운/2025-04-06

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My dream job is prosecutor. Prosecutor is associated with law. So, i'll explain why i chose it. When i 15years old, my parents recommend book which is linked to prosecutor's life and i expired this book because i know that prosecutor's variety life, i din't know. After i read book, i wonder what prosecutor is? and i'm dreamed this job which my future job. If i get to be prosecutor, i'll be a wise and fair and help many people.

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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

My dream job is prosecutor.

>> My dream job is to be a prosecutor.

OR >> My dream is to be a prosecutor.

Prosecutor is associated with law.

>> A prosecutor is associated with the law.

So, I'll explain why I chose it.

>> CORRECT!

When I 15years old, my parents recommend book which is linked to prosecutor's life and I expired this book because I know that prosecutor's variety life, I din't know.

>> When I was 15years old, my parents recommended a book which is connected to a prosecutor's life and I was inspired by this book because I know that a prosecutor's life can vary that I didn't know.

After I read book, I wonder what prosecutor is? and I'm dreamed this job which my future job.

>> After I read the book, I wonder what a prosecutor is, and I dreamed of this job as my future job.
If I get to be prosecutor, I'll be a wise and fair and help many people.

>> If I get to be a prosecutor someday, I'll be a wise and fair prosecutor to help many people.

OR >> If I get to be a prosecutor someday, I'll be wise and fair to help many people.