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What are your thoughts on vegetarians?

차진혁/2025-04-03

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I think the vegetarian is very hungry because vegetarian are not eat meat and sea food. So vegetarian is very hard.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good night's sleep! 


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                        What are your thoughts on vegetarians?


I think the vegetarian is very hungry because vegetarian are not eat meat and sea food.
>> I think vegetarians must be very hungry because they don't eat meat and seafood.

So vegetarian is very hard.
>> Therefore, it's hard to be a vegetarian. 
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