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이현아/2025-04-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Do you prefer living in a large city or a small village? Why? I prefer small cities over big ones. because I don’t like crowded places. I enjoy spending time in quiet areas where I can relax. Since I have a car, I can drive wherever I need to go.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Isabel, your response is clear and well-structured, with just a minor adjustment needed for sentence structure. Be mindful of starting sentences with lowercase letters when they should be capitalized. Other than that, great job expressing your preference concisely. Keep up the good work!

~ T. Lia

I prefer small cities over big ones.
>> CORRECT

because I don’t like crowded places.
>> Because I don’t like crowded places.

I enjoy spending time in quiet areas where I can relax.
>> CORRECT

Since I have a car, I can drive wherever I need to go.
>> CORRECT

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