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김나은/2025-04-01

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Having friends is very important. Because have friends is not lonely. But having a good friend is better than having so many friends.
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Hi there, Na Eun. I'm so proud of your homework today. You are making progress, and you did a great job today. Keep it up, and I look forward to seeing more improvements. Have a good night. ~Teacher Jane c",) 


Having friends is very important. 
>> CORRECT 

Because have friends is not lonely. 
>> Because having friends is not lonely. 

But having a good friend is better than having so many friends. 
>> CORRECT 
>> OR: But having that one good friend is better than having so many not-so-good friends.
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