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What did you do last weekend?

최정희/2025-04-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I did house chores like vacuuming and laundry etc... I exercised at home after house chores. I usually stay at home during the weekend so I exercise more than week days. I also prepared break fast meals for next week.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Lydia!

You had a productive weekend! ^^

Please take note of the following corrections:

Removed "etc." (since "like" already implies examples).

"More than weekdays" → "more than on weekdays" (grammatical accuracy).

"Break fast" → "breakfast" (correct spelling).

~ Trixia

CONTENT:

I did house chores like vacuuming and laundry etc...

- I did house chores like vacuuming and laundry.

I exercised at home after house chores.

- After that, I exercised at home.

I usually stay at home during the weekend so I exercise more than week days.

- I usually stay at home on weekends, so I exercise more than on weekdays.

I also prepared break fast meals for next week.

- I also prepared breakfast meals for the next week.