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What is the deepest part of the ocean? What can we find there?

차진혁/2025-04-01

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The deepest part of the ocean is marian trench because it is Depth 11000m. So it's the same to everest mountain.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of your day! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                What is the deepest part of the ocean? What can we find there?



The deepest part of the ocean is marian trench because it is Depth 11000m.
>> The deepest part of the ocean is the Mariana Trench because its depth is 11000m.

So it's the same to everest mountain.
>> So it's similar to Mt. Everest. 
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