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박대준/2025-04-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hi there! It is been a long time to access this page. That means I haven’t studying hard and did not my best to keep my goals. I will have a lot of gathering during business trip in Jeju Island. So I need to refrain from alcohol this time. I think so that my TOEIC score will be determined by whether I drink or not.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, William. I'm happy to see you writing again, and it's always a pleasure to read your essays. I wish you good luck on your business trip, but also, don't forget to have fun. I also wish you luck on your journey to sobriety ^^ I hope you arrived on Jeju Island safe and sound. I'll talk to you in class later. ~Teacher Jane c",) 


Hi there! 
>> CORRECT 

It is been a long time to access this page. 
>> It has been a long time since I accessed this page. 

That means I haven’t studying hard and did not my best to keep my goals. 
>> That means I haven't been studying hard and doing my best to keep up with my goals. 

I will have a lot of gathering during business trip in Jeju Island. 
>> I will have a lot of things to do during my business trip on Jeju Island. 

So I need to refrain from alcohol this time. 
>> CORRECT 

I think so that my TOEIC score will be determined by whether I drink or not.
>> I think that my TOEIC score will be determined by whether I drink or not. 

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