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Have you ever felt that painting takes too much time and effort?

신봉규/2025-03-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I'm not painting well. So I know how difficult drawing is takes too much time and effort. If I have time, I would also like to learn how to draw.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I'm not painting well. So I know how difficult drawing is takes too much time and effort. If I have time, I would also like to learn how to draw.

>> I'm not good at painting, so I understand how difficult drawing is—it takes a lot of time and effort. If I have the time, I would love to learn how to draw.

OR >> I'm not skilled at painting, so I know how challenging drawing can be—it requires a lot of time and effort. If I get the chance, I would love to learn how to draw.