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김우인/2025-03-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think the main thing that makes me to like a certain song is the melody. What makes me to keep have a motivation to listen to a specific song again and again is addictive and attractive melody. However, I think having only a good melody has a limit for me to get attached to songs. To be more attached to the song it also has to have a good lyrics which includes relatable story or well organized structure. Music that I hear daily changes periodically because I can't be attached to the songs that I had added on my playlist for their good melody. Songs that maintain in my playlist are the ones that have not only good melody but also lyrics which I can sympathize with. Therefore, I think melody is the first factor that I consider when I start to like a specific song.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! I can definitely relate to your thoughts on the role of melody in music. But, as you pointed out, once that initial attraction fades, the song’s lyrics and deeper meaning become more important in maintaining that attachment.

-T. Sonny
I think the main thing that makes me to like a certain song is the melody.

>>I think the main reason I like a certain song is the melody.

What makes me to keep have a motivation to listen to a specific song again and again is addictive and attractive melody.

>>What keeps me motivated to listen to a specific song again and again is its addictive and attractive melody.

However, I think having only a good melody has a limit for me to get attached to songs.

>>However, I think having only a good melody has its limits when it comes to getting attached to a song.

To be more attached to the song it also has to have a good lyrics which includes relatable story or well organized structure.

>>To become more attached to a song, it also needs to have good lyrics that tell a relatable story or have a well-organized structure.

Music that I hear daily changes periodically because I can't be attached to the songs that I had added on my playlist for their good melody.

>>The music I listen to daily changes periodically because I can’t stay attached to songs that I added to my playlist solely for their good melody.

Songs that maintain in my playlist are the ones that have not only good melody but also lyrics which I can sympathize with.

>>Songs that remain in my playlist are the ones with not only a good melody but also lyrics that I can sympathize with.
Therefore, I think melody is the first factor that I consider when I start to like a specific song.

>>Correct!