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김예솔/2025-03-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

What are your best and worst birthday memories? When I first saw this question, the first thing that came to in my mind is my 17th birthday. My high school friends came to visit me when the night that one day before my birthday, and did me a surprise party. it was really amazing.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ye Sol!

Oh! It's my first time hearing that story. What about your worst one?

~ Trixia

CONTENT:

When I first saw this question, the first thing that came to in my mind is my 17th birthday.

- When I first saw this question, the first thing that came to my mind was my 17th birthday.

My high school friends came to visit me when the night that one day before my birthday, and did me a surprise party.

- My high school friends surprised me with a party the night before my birthday.

it was really amazing.

- It was an amazing experience!