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Do you think the Internet is the best invention?

이진태/2025-03-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The internet is great invention, I agree with it. However, it is not a best invention. Internet was created only 30 years ago. However, wheel and paper was invented few thousands years ago and human still use it.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

The internet is great invention, I agree with it.
>> The internet is a great invention, and I agree with that. 

However, it is not a best invention.
>> CORRECT 
OR >> However, it is not the greatest invention.

Internet was created only 30 years ago. However, wheel and paper was invented few thousands years ago and human still use it.
>> The internet was created only 30 years ago, whereas the wheel and paper were invented thousands of years ago, and humans still use them today.



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