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어은주/2025-03-28

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Hi sharon First of all, I want to tell you... I got 7.0 overall!!!!! Thank you!!! reading: 7.0 listening: 6.5 wirting: 6.5 speaking: 7.0 I think I can apply any university with this score! except Cambridge or Oxford... On top of that, I have another meeting with university of leeds !!! So, let me inform you my zoom ID then 450 094 5569 or ... yuyinzhu@naver.com I am not sure which is the correct one.. see you!

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Hi June!

I'm so happy for you.

I knew you could do it.

Good job on not losing hope.

Now, you can go to your next steps with a light heart.

Congratulations!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

First of all, I want to tell you...

>> There's something I want to tell you first.
I got 7.0 overall!!

>> I got 7.0 band score for IELTS.

Thank you!!!

>> Correct

I think I can apply any university with this score! except Cambridge or Oxford...

>> I think I can apply to any university with this score!

except Cambridge or Oxford...

>> This is of course not including Cambridge and Oxford.
On top of that, I have another meeting with university of leeds !!!

>> On top of that, I have another meeting with the University of Leeds.