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Fashion advice

한진원/2025-03-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I always advise my daughter that simple fashion is the best. If I could decide, I would have her wear a white shirt and jeans.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Racheal! I can I relate to this. I always tell my kids to prioritize comfort to aesthetics. However, I also tell them about TPO;time, Place and Occassion in order to dress appropriately.See you!
--Teacher Anji


I always advise my daughter that simple fashion is the best.
>> CORRECT
If I could decide, I would have her wear a white shirt and jeans.
>> CORRECT
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