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이현아/2025-03-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
What do you like about your neighborhood? I don’t live in a city in Korea, but I really like my neighborhood. It’s where I was born and I’ve lived here all my life. Maybe that’s why I don’t know much about other places. Cities are too crowded and the traffic is terrible. I enjoy hiking, and there are a lot of mountains near my home. So I can go hiking whenever I have time. My neighborhood is growing, so everything I need like a movie theater, supermarket, and schools is close by. But the best part is that my friends and family all live here. That’s why I love where I live.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Isabel, your response was well-written and easy to understand! You did a great job organizing your ideas clearly and naturally. There were only a couple of minor corrections for smoother sentence flow and punctuation. Keep up the great work!

~ T. Lia

 I don’t live in a city in Korea, but I really like my neighborhood.
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It’s where I was born and I’ve lived here all my life.
>> CORRECT

Maybe that’s why I don’t know much about other places.
>> CORRECT

Cities are too crowded and the traffic is terrible.
>> CORRECT

I enjoy hiking, and there are a lot of mountains near my home.
>> CORRECT

So I can go hiking whenever I have time.
>> This allows me to go hiking whenever I have time.

My neighborhood is growing, so everything I need like a movie theater, supermarket, and schools is close by.
>> My neighborhood is growing, so everything I need, like a movie theater, a supermarket, and schools, is close by.

But the best part is that my friends and family all live here.
>> CORRECT

That’s why I love where I live.
>> CORRECT
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